得分 表达能力	14	11	8	5	2
切题与否	切题	切题	基本切题	基本切题	思路紊乱
内容表述	清楚	清楚	不够清楚	不清楚	条理不清
文字表达	通顺，连 贯性较好	连贯	勉强连贯	连贯性差	谈不上连贯
语言表达能力	表达灵活多样；基本上无语 言错误，仅 有个别错误	表达灵活；有少量语法错误	语法错误相当多，其中有些 是严重错误	严重语法 错误较多	语言支离破碎 或大部分句子 均有错误，且 多为严重错误
总体印象	切题，内容丰富，语言流畅 连贯，表达能 力较强	切题，内容 较丰富，语 言流畅可读	基本切题，内容能说明主题，语言基本可读	基本切题，表 达能力差，文 章勉强可读	思路紊乱，基 本上不具备书 面表达能力， 文章不可读

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　　2．如题目中给出主题句、起始句、结束句，均不得计入所写字数。
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字数	149~140	139~130	129~120	119~110	109~100	<99
扣分	1	2	3	5	7	9

    评卷实例：The Goal of Life （共有3篇范文）
 
    范文之一

    After reading this instructive story, we can learn that there is no go goal, there is no life, and we should set new goals for life in different periods of life. Otherwise sad story such as the disabled man mentioned in the story would happen. Only with the renewed goals, we can improve ourselves step by step, and make our life more colorful and meaningful.

    Certainly, everyone has his own goal of life. I have mine too. My goal is to become a famous surgeon. I’ll work hard to achieve this goal by learning and practicing more, so that I can make myself more knowledgeable and skillful, and use them to benefit my patients. If I have achieved this goal, I would set up a new one. Then, I’ll do my best to achieve it.

    Therefore, everyone should set different goals in different periods of life, and try his best to achieve it. In this way, we will live happily.

    范文之二 
    After reading the story, I have learned from it that there was disabled English man who had climbed all the famous mountains before he was 28 years old and then he killed himself. Why did he kill himself ? The answer is that he had accomplish his goal that his parents asked him to do so . So he felt that he had no new goal in his life.

    I, myself, am a doctor. Therefore my goal is to cure patients. When I see my patients suffering from one disease or another, I am feeling very miserable and sympathetic. Then I try my best to help them and make them recover soon. Life is beautiful, nobody has the right to make them suffering or deprive them of their right to enjoy life. So I am determined to help my patients recover.

    From the first day I stepped into hospital and became a doctor, I have cured thousands of thousands of patients. Seeing their healthy smiling faces, I feel very happy. However, this isn’t enough, because there are many diseases which are incurable, such as AIDS. Therefore, there are a lot of goals for me to achieve . I will devote all my life energy to the great cause of medicine.

    范文之三
    There is a story that talks about a young British man who has little-ill body climb all the famous mountains before the age of twenty-eight by his own courage. In our mind, he was a brave man, but to our surprised, he finished his won life at twenty-right, because he said that all things he had done, there is now new goal in his life.

    From this story, we conclusion that man must have goal of life. If we have no goal of life. We will do nothing in our life, the only thing we did is wasting the time. On the other hand, if we finished our goal of life, we should make a new goal of life. Otherwise, we will like the young man of the story.

    My goal of life is to finish my social value. Do my best to help others. And enjoy the life. I think my goal of life won’t be achieved because there are so many people who need help. I will to my best to achieve that goal of life.